1st Grade Writing



 67   Are sports essential to the healthy development of children? (2)
H32年7月9日(木) 
TOPIC: 1st Grade ( Practice 2 )
 
Are sports essential to the healthy development of children?
( Do sports help develop good character in children? )
 
POINTS:
  • Teamwork
  • Following rules and fair play
  • Punctuality
  • Hard work
  • Acceptance of failure
  • Joy of victory
  • Discipline
  • Competition
  • Sense of achievement
  • Aggressiveness
  • Academic ahievement
[ essay 1 ]
 
Sports are not only a source of enjoyment but also a way to maintain a good physical health and help children develop good character. Experiences they gain through sports, such as competition, success, and failure, are what they will find valuable later in business and social life.
 
First, children can learn the importance of hard work and punctuality through playing sports. When they try to succeed in sports, they will realize regular practice and tenacious efforts are necessary to give good performance. These traits are also important for success in many other aspects of life.
 
Second, in most sports, there are some rules that need to be followed. Through these rules, children learn the value of teamwork, following rules and the importance of fair play. In society, it is also essential to observe rules and cooperate with those around us.
 
Third, whether an individual sport or a team sport, children can learn the joy of victory, and also must learn how to deal with the disappointment that comes with defeat. By losing sporting events, they can learn to accept and adapt to failure, and even by winning games, they learn to be more considerate about the feelings of the defeated team.
 
In conclusion, sports can build good character of children and teach them important lessons to life, which will be useful throughout their lives.
 
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[ essay 2 ]
 
Of course, playing sports are good for the health, but it is also a way for children to develop good character. The lessons learned from playing sports will help children throughout their lives. Let me describe how sports might affect the character of children.
 
Through hard work, children can learn the importance of hard work. Whatever the sport they play, they need to practice hard and make a lot of efforts to succeed in sports. When they win the competition following hard work, they surely learn the real sense of victory, and when faced with defeat, they must learn how to cope with the disappointment.
 
Also, by playing sports, children learn the value of following rules and the importance of fair play. When they leave school and go out into the real world, they will find these qualities are indispensable in business and in their social life.
 
In conclusion, Sports are not only for entertainment, but help children build good character. By socializing and competing with other people, children develop necessary skills that are important later in life.
 
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[ essay 3 ]
 
Sports are very important for children. They can learn a wide variety of things through sports. Without a doubt, sports help develop good character in children. This essay will consider how children can develop their character through sports.
 
First of all, children can learn how important teamwork is. Most sports, which children may play, require a partnership or teamwork. Working with other teammates, they can get to realize that their team will not win if they don't work together. Also, teamwork helps them work together in other activities, such as class performance or discussion.
 
Second, sports help children learn to follow rules and fair play. Sports usually have certain rules, so children have to follow them to be successful. Also, they can learn importance of fair play for each of the teams to enjoy the game.
 
Lastly, sports don't always give children the joy of victory. As long as they compete with each other, Some can win and others must lose. However, by confronting the failure, they can learn how to deal with the failure and accept it anyhow. It also helps children deal with other problems when they face some difficulty.
 
In conclusion, there are many good points to children playing sports. Although doing sports too much might jeopardize their study, it never outweighs benefits of doing sports. I believe that children should try to play sports as much as possible.



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