1st Grade Writing



 29   Can international terrorism ever be eliminated? ( 2015-2 )
H32年7月8日(水) 
 
TOPIC: 1st Grade ( 2015-2 )
 
Is the fight against terrorism being won?
 
POINTS:
  • Civil liberties
  • Safety and security
  • Surveillance
  • International cooperation / relation
  • Diplomacy
  • Military solution
  • Economic inequality
  • education
  • Financial costs
  • Historical background
 
[ essay 1 ]
 
No matter what reason it may be, or whatever cause they might have, terrorism cannot be justified in any given occasion. Although several measures have been taken so far, it still threatens all the countries around the world. However, I believe it could be possiblethat international terrorism could be eliminated.
 
First, international cooperation is indispensable for eradicating terrorism. Since recent terrorist activities are often organized internationally, it is a big help to share information about them with countries around the world, so that every one of the nations can always keep an eye on terrorists and monitor their activities.
 
Second, military intervention can provide solutions to the problem. Large scale military operations against terrorism have proven to be an effective way to suppress subversive activities done by terrorist groups. Also, the UN military forces can be dispatched beyond the border effectively to fight against terrorism.
 
Lastly, there should be more surveillance of suspected terrorist groups. Regular monitoring or security checking at airports or train stations makes it easier to track down terrorist assaults. In addition, strict surveillance around the clock can discourage terrorists from carrying out any destructive activities.
 
In conclusion, although it is not easy to combat terrorism, it is the most impending issue we have to deal with right now. Effective surveillance and international cooperation must be required to make our world a safe place.
 
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[ essay 2 ]
 
Terrorism has been threatening us all over the world. Despite ongoing efforts against it, little headway is being made. This essay will consider how we can fight against terrorism.
 
First of all, surveillance by the government or media can help discourage terrorist activities. By installing more security cameras or deploying more security guards or police officers in public places, terrorism can be spotted before the operation is carried out. As a result, these efforts will ensure more safety and security.
 
Second, it might be inevitable to ask the military to fight against terrorism. Today, terrorist groups are so well-organized that it is very difficult to track them down. However, the military, which is specialized in these activities, can help deal with the problem.
 
Last, international cooperation is required to fight against terrorism. By exchanging information about potential terrorism operations, many countries can help each other to find when and where the next attack will occur.
 
In summary, although there are many ways to fight against terrorism, we need to make concerted efforts not only on a domestic level, but also on an international level. We should help each other to free the world from terrorism.
 
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[ essay 3 ]
 
The war on terrorism has been ongoing for years. Despite tenacious effort against it, little headway is being made. Taking a new approach and proper measures are now required.
 
For many years, we've resorted to military force to combat terrorism, but it has been proven that military action does not offer a lasting solution. Instead, it only creates more hatred against the power and terrorism never ceases to come about. We should realize we cannot make people do what they want by using the threat of force.
 
Instead of relying on violence, more effort must be made to reach diplomatic solutions. If we consider the enormous cost of waging an extended battle or war, making a compromise during negotiations is a small price to pay. All parties must be more flexible in their demands.
 
Lastly, it is important to create conditions where terrorist activities are prevented or discouraged at least. No matter how uncomfortable it may be, more surveillance in public places will be needed to ensure our safety and security. Citizens must be free from worries about terrorism in their daily life.
 
In conclusion, it's clear that current efforts to fight against terrorism are misguided. Violence begets violence. We need to reevaluate our actions and take a more pragmatic approach.
 
 



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